I’m working on draft two of a new novel, called Everything In Water. Visual artists get to share their work, so I wanted to share mine. I call this piece, Page 1.
Draft Two, Page 1
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3 responses to “Draft Two, Page 1”
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Exotic! Captivating.
The words ‘canopy’ and ‘leaves’ in the same sentence kinda threw me for a bit…reread to grab the correct interpretation.
Am I supposed to be seeing more of Chapter 1 or just the couple of paragraphs? -
Just page 1 – a teaser. More to come later. I’m deep into Draft Two, dreaming of easy fixes and extra paint in the form of words.
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Just the first page, Steve.
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